童話故事改寫 (4)

By Joanna, Erin, Sarah, Anna and Zoie (grade 6)
Gretel and Hansel are hungry.  They want to eat some candy, but they don’t have any.  They want to buy some in the market, but they don’t have any money.  So, they go to the witch’s candy house.  There are many kinds of candy in that special house.  The witch is kind and friendly in the afternoon, but she becomes very scary in the evening.  They decide to go there in morning.  Unfortunately, they forget the time when they bag all kinds of candy there.  At 6 0’clock sharp, the witch becomes scary.  She wants to eat them.  So, Gretel and Hansel run as quickly as they can, leaving the old scary witch behind.  When they are so happy to be home safely, they find the eyeballs instead of candy.  They close their eyes and scream as loudly as they can.  When they open their eyes again, they find themselves sleeping in bed.  “Thank God!  It’s only a dream,” they say to themselves