There was a storm
last night. It came with thunder and
lightning, so nobody was on the street. It
was so quiet. Suddenly, the lightning
hit a tree, and it fell on a puppy. At this crucial moment, a police officer
showed up to help this puppy. I think
the police office was so brave and kind.
He helped the puppy that was in danger.
There was a storm
with thunder and lightning last night.
Nobody was out on the street because the street became very dangerous in
the storm. A tree fell on a puppy. AT this special moment, a police officer came
to save the puppy. This puppy likes this
police office, and the police office likes the puppy, too. They have become best friends to each other.
There was a storm
last night. It came with thunder and
lightning. There was no one on the
street. Only a dog walked alone on the
street. The lightning hit a tree, and
the tree fell on the dog. A policeman
saw it and came to help the dog. The dog
was saved. It is very happy.
There was a storm last
night. It came with thunder and
lightning. The street was very quiet and
lonely. A dog walked on a street. The lightning suddenly hit a tree, and it
fell on the dog. The dog was in great
pain. At this crucial moment, a
policeman came and rescued this dog.
這篇寫作要注意的地方:
1.
打雷:thunder (v, n)
2.
閃電:lightning (v, n, adj)
3.
intense moment
緊張時刻
4.
crucial
moment 重要關頭
5.
be in
danger:有危險
þ His life is in danger.
þ You are in danger of losing your job if you go on like this.
6.
dangerous:危險的
þ It is dangerous to ride a scooter without wearing your helmet.