學生作文---GEPT初級檢定50字作文 (3)

 By Johnson (grade 5)

There was a storm last night.  It came with thunder and lightning, so nobody was on the street.  It was so quiet.  Suddenly, the lightning hit a tree, and it fell on a puppy. At this crucial moment, a police officer showed up to help this puppy.  I think the police office was so brave and kind.  He helped the puppy that was in danger.

  By Kitty (grade 5)

There was a storm with thunder and lightning last night.  Nobody was out on the street because the street became very dangerous in the storm.  A tree fell on a puppy.  AT this special moment, a police officer came to save the puppy.  This puppy likes this police office, and the police office likes the puppy, too.  They have become best friends to each other.

By Sarah (grade 6)

There was a storm last night.  It came with thunder and lightning.  There was no one on the street.  Only a dog walked alone on the street.  The lightning hit a tree, and the tree fell on the dog.  A policeman saw it and came to help the dog.  The dog was saved.  It is very happy.

   By Joy (grade 5)

There was a storm last night.  It came with thunder and lightning.  The street was very quiet and lonely.  A dog walked on a street.  The lightning suddenly hit a tree, and it fell on the dog.  The dog was in great pain.  At this crucial moment, a policeman came and rescued this dog.

這篇寫作要注意的地方：

1.     打雷：thunder (v, n)

2.     閃電：lightning (v, n, adj)

3.     intense moment 緊張時刻

4.     crucial moment 重要關頭

5.     be in danger：有危險

þ His life is in danger. 

þ You are in danger of losing your job if you go on like this.

6.     dangerous：危險的

þ It is dangerous to ride a scooter without wearing your helmet.