童話故事改寫 (5)

By Joy and Cindy (grade 5)
Pinocchio does not like school.  One day, he cuts class again and wonders around on the street as usual.  He meets some older kids from his school.  They decide to go to the carnival which just comes to visit in town.  Over at the carnival, they get on some exciting rides, like the roller coaster, the Ferris wheel, the merry-go-round and so on.  They also play some fun games and watch some interesting shows.  When Pinocchio gets home, he finds his grandfather waiting for him in the living room.  His grandfather is very angry about what he does.  So, his grandfather punishes him by making him weed the garden, water the flowers, feed the chicks and milk the cows.  From this punishment, Pinocchio learns that doing house chores is more tiring and less fun than going to school.  From then on, he goes to school every day and has more fun with his friends there.

童話故事改寫 (4)

By Joanna, Erin, Sarah, Anna and Zoie (grade 6)
Gretel and Hansel are hungry.  They want to eat some candy, but they don’t have any.  They want to buy some in the market, but they don’t have any money.  So, they go to the witch’s candy house.  There are many kinds of candy in that special house.  The witch is kind and friendly in the afternoon, but she becomes very scary in the evening.  They decide to go there in morning.  Unfortunately, they forget the time when they bag all kinds of candy there.  At 6 0’clock sharp, the witch becomes scary.  She wants to eat them.  So, Gretel and Hansel run as quickly as they can, leaving the old scary witch behind.  When they are so happy to be home safely, they find the eyeballs instead of candy.  They close their eyes and scream as loudly as they can.  When they open their eyes again, they find themselves sleeping in bed.  “Thank God!  It’s only a dream,” they say to themselves

童話故事改寫 (3)

By Jimmy, Kitty and Johnson (grade 5)

Today is Sunday.  Goldilocks goes to the bear family’s home.  “There is no one in the house,” Goldilocks says to herself.  She goes into the house and starts her adventure there.  He finds some food in the kitchen for her hungry stomach.  She plays the toys that the baby bear keeps in a toy box.  After she has great food and plays some fun games, she starts to feel tired.  She decides to take a nap for a while.  She goes to the big bedroom where she finds 3 different beds.  She tries out the beds and finally lies on the one with a word “MAMA” on the pillow.  Later, the bear family comes home and is shocked to see the messy house.  They also find Goldilocks snoring in their bedroom.  They are so angry that they decide to eat her up.

童話故事改寫 (2)

By Joseph, Hawk and Simon (grade 6)
Monkey King likes bananas.  He always eats bananas by his banana tree.  He is hungry for his favorite food, bananas as usual, so he goes to his banana tree.  To his surprise, there is no banana in his banana tree.  He is extremely sad and feeling so hungry.  He decides to go to the supermarket to buy some.  Thirty minutes later, he comes out of the supermarket with empty hands.  There AREN’T any bananas there, either.  He is upset and starving.  He goes home and walks into the kitchen to look for something to eat.  There is nothing to eat in his kitchen.  He cries out, “I’m starving.  I want food!!” over and over again.  He faints for being too hungry. When he opens his eyes again, he finds himself napping in his banana tree, surrounded by hundreds of bananas.

童話故事改寫 (1)

By Eileen (grade 5) and Stephen (grade 7)

Aladdin has a magic lamp.  He is very poor, so he wants to sell it.  However, nobody wants to buy the lamp.  He becomes very upset, and he starts to touch the lamp softly.  A happy-looking giant comes out of the lamp and asks what Aladdin wants for his first wish.  Aladdin wishes for a lot of money.  Genie says proudly, “Your wish is granted.”  Aladdin is rich with lots of money to buy everything he wants.  He then wishes to play with Genie forever.  Genie says with a big smile, “It’s a piece of cake.”  They two have fun together every day.  Silly Aladdin has his last wish, which is to turn himself into Green Giant.  When the third wish is granted, Genie turns into a handsome prince and goes back to his own country, the Very Far Away.  Aladdin the Green Giant is now busy fighting with bad guys around the world.

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